I know its a wip, I don't feel worthy of even reviewing but I think you can do better. Around 20 sec was pretty good drum fill to bring in the bass. But I would add like a synth arp or strings in the background to accompany the bells to make it a little interesting. Even with the drop at the beginning it still seems like an intro imo. I would think adding some high hats for rhythm would be nice addition too. Keep at it.